Journal Post 1/20.10

The theme of the story of an hour is tradgey becuase when sher she finds out that her husband is alive she dies in shock. Also when she find out he dead she doesnt even feel bad about it and get a sence of relife from it insted of being mad and sad and having all kinds of mixed about him. When she finds out she might have been happy but since she was feeling relife she didnt exceppt it so she died in fear and was scared that he might have come back and hunted her.

Journal Post 1/19.10

Man vs. Himself may be the hardest thing to over come. When you are faces two choices it may be something little but it also may be life or death. I think man vs. Himself mean that you conshinsh is telling you do thing and they are debating each other who gets to win...well they are both you but i guess you could say two of you are debating which sides the YOU want to take either one. Say the matter is you are in a plane and there are tariosts going into the white house, would you rather die and save the white house or would you rather live or you may die when you crash into it and have the white house be crashed into and have the Washington D.C at risk for a national disaster.

Writing goals

1. To work on grammer
2. To have a wide range of vocabulary
3. To hsave a strong thesis statment
4. To have a good conclusion
5. To make good connections and transfering from paragraph to paragraph